FIRST PARAGRAPH REVIEW $30  ON SALE $20!

Fiction Writers! Did you know that your first paragraph of your short story or novel is the most important paragraph for publishers, editors, and fans. Everyone is short on time these days, so your first paragraph has to be engaging, enticing, and immediately hook your readers in a few sentences.

Otherwise it could be passed over or rejected for publication in seconds.

As a published fiction writer, teacher, and editor for over thirty years, I can help you decide if your first paragraph will grab your readers' attention and interest.

For a limited time, my First Paragraph Reviews are discounted and available for fiction writers in all genres.

In the form below, send me only the first paragraph of your story for an honest analysis and some tips on how to give you a better chance to grab a reader's attention. Please keep it under 500 words. I'll get back to you ASAP--that's me, Irene, the Literary Groupie, a real person--never A.I. Promise!

Due to the volume of this offer, it may take up to 6-8 weeks for a reply, but you have my word that I take your words seriously and will respond soon with my best feedback.